Admiration for days
Of ways
She played with facets of my mind
Then left behind a trail of photos that said
Forget me not
Or my spotted spots
Which inspire plots
Of ways to rock
While reaching deep
Gently putting here to sleep
And underneath her closed eyes
Was a smile full and content
Copyright © 2007 Domonique Murdock
Of ways
She played with facets of my mind
Then left behind a trail of photos that said
Forget me not
Or my spotted spots
Which inspire plots
Of ways to rock
While reaching deep
Gently putting here to sleep
And underneath her closed eyes
Was a smile full and content
Copyright © 2007 Domonique Murdock
4 comments:
I read this poem over and over again. And each time, the words became images in my mind.
I'm sure its a great feeling to have facets of your mind caressed, having never been touched before by the gentle thoughts of she.
photos (pictures) are worth 1000 words. The fact that she leaves behind trails speaks volumes. don't ya think?
I love depth. Deepness. You are the epitome of that.
she closed her eyes and smiled because she saw you...[she knew the trail she left behind would lead you to her resting place]
the poem is touching & the photo is beautiful! I love it!
thanks for sharing it!
Love U! =)
btw...where do you find your photos?? I had to look at the photo again...it's simply gorgeous!!
Very sweet and soft. I think it's cool that you aren't afraid of "sweet" or "soft". That speaks of a man who is secure in himself. Keep it up!
PS: I like what's under the surface too. I can see why UB is so impressed with your writing.
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